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INSERT - THE SCRIPT
We take a glimpse of the script Rick is writing on his computer.
We NOW NOTICE that on his monitor is what appears to be a
FULL-FLEDGED SCREENPLAY being typed. Upon CLOSER OBSERVATION,
we see this text:
“With their eyes FOCUSED SOLELY on ONE ANOTHER,
Rich and Deanne are unaware of the people that
walk PAST THEM.
RICH
So what’s your name?
DEANNE
My name’s Deanne.
RICH
Deanne, nice to meet you.
My name’s Rich.
Standing face-to-face to each other, Rich and Deanne
SHAKE HANDS for the first time...”
BACK TO SCENE
Rick continues typing for a few more seconds before stopping to take a short break.
LEANING BACK IN HIS CHAIR once again, he unintentionally sets HIS EYES on the
photo of him and Vanessa Lee on the desk. Soriano PICKS the photo up and looks
at it for a while before OPENING ONE OF THE DRAWERS in his table to put the photo
inside.
A FEW SECONDS LATER, the CORDLESS PHONE next to his computer keyboard RINGS.
Soriano PICKS IT UP to answer it.
RICK
Hello?
We have NO CLUE as to whom Rick is talking to. We only watch him as a
WIDE-EYED expression EMERGES on his face.
RICK
Dude- What are you doing back here?
(A long pause)
You did WHAT??
Soriano looks at the LANCER banner on his wall. He then looks at his phone
and GRINS. He SHAKES HIS HEAD too.
RICK
Man, I gotta tell the other guys about
this. In fact, we’re going to a party
tonight...why don’t you come with us and
tell us what happened? Is that cool?
(A pause)
All right then, late.
Rick turns off his cordless phone and once again SMILES. He PONDERS for a second.
RICK
Crazy Dandren.
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EXT. DENISE’S HOUSE - AFTERNOON
A BRIEF GLIMPSE of the TWO-STORY house Denise lives in. It is located
in an EXTREMELY NICE, VERY QUIET suburban neighborhood.
INT. DENISE’S HOUSE - HER ROOM
The beauty of Denise’s neighborhood CONTRASTS with the SAD LOOK on her face.
She is talking on the phone with her friend KATHERINE.
INTERCUT - DENISE’S ROOM / KATHERINE’S ROOM
DENISE
-so I don’t know what to do, Kathy. I’ve
tried calling so many times, but my messages
haven’t been answered.
KATHERINE
Girl, you need to stop worrying. If your
messages haven’t been answered, then you know
something’s wrong here.
DENISE
What should I do?
KATHERINE
Call the whole thing off, that’s what I would
do. Is there anyone else on your mind?
A pause as a SMILE APPEARS on Denise’s face.
DENISE
Well, there’s this one other person I’ve met
recently. He’s very nice, and seems to be
real fond of me.
(Katherine nods in response)
He even bought me ‘belated’ Valentine’s
gifts.
KATHERINE
Well then, there you go. Forget about
that jerk and make a move on this guy.
DENISE
I dunno...
KATHERINE
What now?
DENISE
I don’t want this person to feel like I’m
just settling for him if I DO break the
whole thing off.
KATHERINE
Do whatever you think is right, girl. Just
don’t worry about it at that party tonight.
DENISE
I won’t. So when are we going?
KATHERINE
What time is it?
(she looks at her watch)
It’s 4:30. I’ll pick you up in two hours.
DENISE
Okay.
KATHERINE
You know’s there’s something wrong in your
relationship when you’re spending Saturday
night with one of your girlfriends.
Denise has a MOROSE expression on her face after her friend tells her this.
This ISN’T something Denise wants pointed out to her.
DENISE
Thanks for reminding me.
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EXT. SHYAMALAN HOUSE - AFTERNOON
Soriano PARKS his Corolla alongside the curb outside Dandren’s house.
Parking behind Soriano is Mark’s Civic. From the cars emerge Rick, Mark
as well as Johan and Stephen.
STEPHEN
Dude, I wonder why that guy’s back from
school?
RICK
You’ll find out.
MARK
Must’ve gotten arrested or something.
JOHAN
Probably.
Soriano goes to the door and RINGS THE DOORBELL. A few seconds later,
Dandren opens it.
DANDREN
Sup dawgs- Long time, no see.
RICK
(frowns and grins simultaneously)
What are you talking about? It’s been only
about, what, two months since we last saw
you here...
STEPHEN
So what happened?
DANDREN
(shrugs)
I went to a party, a fight broke out-
and I got arrested.
Mark looks at Johan and PATS him once on the shoulder.
MARK
What’d I tell you?
DANDREN
(has a mischievous grin on
his face)
So Stephen, how’s Rebecca doing?
STEPHEN
(frowns at Dandren’s question)
Uh, she’s OKAY. Why do you ask that?
DANDREN
Just wondering, man... I still think
she’s PRETTY HOT.
Mark, Johan and Rick laugh in response.
DANDREN
(grinning)
What time’s the party?
RICK
(briefly looks at his watch)
We’re heading there right now.
STEPHEN
And NO, Rebecca is not coming with us.
She’s going with our other friends.
DANDREN
I didn’t say a word.
Dandren’s MOM appears behind him.
DANDREN’S MOM
Dandren, you’re not going out again...
are you?
DANDREN
Relax mom, I won’t get arrested this time.
DANDREN’S MOM
You better make sure...or else you’re
gonna have to find someone ELSE to
bail you out of jail.
DANDREN
Yea- I know, I know.
DANDREN’S MOM
And don’t be out late!
Dandren’s mom walks away. Walking out of the front door and LOCKING IT
behind him, Dandren then looks at his four friends again.
He shakes his head.
DANDREN
And I’m SUPPOSE to be glaaad I’m home.
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EXT. PARK - AFTERNOON
Owen and his NEW GIRLFRIEND-the dancing showgirl at Spearmint Rhino-are
too busy MAKING OUT in Owen’s car...which is in a parking lot. There are
other cars around, but EVERYBODY else is in the park.
GIRLFRIEND
Are we gonna be doing this all day, baby?
OWEN
Well, we could run around in the park
butt-naked, but I think those people
out there will mind.
GIRLFRIEND
Isn’t there any party we could go to?
OWEN
What, you don’t like the one in my pants?
Chau’s girlfriend SMILES in response. She then KISSES HIM EVEN MORE.
As she does so, Owen gets a pondering look on his face.
OWEN
Actually, there is a party tonight.
GIRLFRIEND
Can we go??
OWEN
Sure thing, babe... I just hope
what’s-her-name won’t be there.
GIRLFRIEND
You mean your OTHER girlfriend?
Chau has a NON-ENTHUSIASTIC LOOK on his face.
OWEN
(nods)
Yea- My OTHER girlfriend.
GIRLFRIEND
Sooo- Do I have anything in common with her?
OWEN
Yea, you both have jobs. The only
difference is, I like yours better.
GIRLFRIEND
And why’s that??
OWEN
Because yours involve blowing.
His girl smiles.
GIRLFRIEND
You’re silly.
OWEN
(checking out his girl’s body)
No, I’m aroused!
They continue MAKING OUT.
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EXT. UNIVERSITY OF CALIFORNIA, IRVINE - FRAT HOUSE - EVENING
SUBTITLE: “UC IRVINE...”
SUBTITLE #2: “7:00 P.M.”
There are DOZENS OF PARTYGOERS KICKING BACK outside the building. MORE CARS
are arriving in the parking lot.
INT. FRATERNITY HOUSE - PARTY - EVENING
There are LOTS OF COLLEGE STUDENTS inside the room DRINKING AND HAVING A GOOD
TIME. While other people are RELAXING TO THE MUSIC, Dandren, Rick, Mark, Stephen
and Johan barely enter the room. They check out the SURROUNDING ATMOSPHERE.
MARK
So this is how a frat party looks like,
huh?
STEPHEN
I thought there’d be more boozing
going on.
DANDREN
And, UH, more sex.
Now turning their heads, they spot Albert, Melvin, Ben and the other two guys
they ran into AT STARBUCKS a few weeks earlier. Melvin WAVES HIS ARM at them
while Ben is too busy drinking BEER from his cup. Albert uses his hand to form
a cup around his mouth. He is about to yell something NONSENSICAL.
ALBERT
(apparently drunk)
Hey, TOSSS THE SALAAAD!!!
Albert, and the other guys-who are also DRUNK, begin shouting and PUMPING
THEIR FISTS into the air.
JOHAN
At least you guys got the BOOZING part right.
Albert and the other guys CONTINUE MAKING A FOOL out of themselves.
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EXT. ROAD - EVENING
Katherine’s car CRUISES DOWN a road leading to the university.
INT. KATHERINE’S CAR - EVENING
There is a BRIEF SILENCE inside Katherine’s car. Denise is the first one to
speak.
DENISE
So who do you think’s gonna be there?
KATHERINE
I dunno. A LOT of fine-looking
guys, hopefully.
Denise nods.
KATHERINE
Do you know who’s really fine, though?
Niema. Now there’s a guy I wouldn’t mind
asking me for my digits.
DENISE
Maybe you’ll see him tonight.
KATHERINE
MAYBE.
Another pause.
DENISE
I wonder who I’ll see.
KATHERINE
Well, hopefully- the person you were MEANT
to be with.
DENISE
Don’t be TOO sure.
KATHERINE
I’m telling you- By the time this party is
over, you would’ve already found your
significant other. I’ll even bet you on that.
DENISE
(smiles)
No thanks.
(a pause)
How much were you willing to bet?
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INT. FRATERNITY HOUSE - PARTY - EVENING
Dandren, and the other guys are still looking around to see if there are
more people they know present at this party. They TURN THEIR HEADS to
look at the big screen TV that a COUPLE OF OTHER STUDENTS sitting on a
couch are looking at. On the TV, the movie “INDIANA JONES AND THE TEMPLE OF
DOOM” is being shown.
RICK
Haven’t seen that movie in a while.
Soriano once again hears the voice of someone call him from the side.
It is Niema, who is holding a cup filled with BEER.
NIEMA
Hey Soriano, this is the umpteenth
time we ran into each other.
The two exchange high fives.
RICK
Yup- I just can’t stand being away from
you, man.
NIEMA
Dick, whatever. Hey-
(turns to look at all the girls
inside the room)
There’re a lot of fine girls in this
room, buddy. Make a move.
RICK
(looks to his left)
Well, I’m pretty sure YOU did.
Niema frowns and looks to his left as well. A FEW FEET AWAY, THREE BEAUTIFUL
BLONDE GIRLS are waving at him. Mihran ENTHUSIASTICALLY waves back.
RICK
So who told you about this party?
NIEMA
Dude-this fraternity’s HUGE, man...
even Long Beach has a chapter in it.
RICK
No kidding?
NIEMA
Yup...
TWO BEAUTIFUL BRUNETTES walk up to Mihran to summon him to kick it with them.
He turns to begin walking away with them. He briefly looks at Rick.
NIEMA
And you just might run into someone
you didn’t expect to be here.
Niema then walks away. A few seconds later, Jon Alba walks past Rick...giving
him an ARROGANT SMILE as two BEAUTIFUL ASIAN GIRLS each stand by his side.
LIP STICK MARKS dot most of Alba’s face. He then walks away. Rick, NOT
BELIEVING what he just saw, has a surprised expression in response.
Dandren, Mark, Johan and Stephen GATHER around a small table that has SODA
BOTTLES, a VARIETY OF CHIPS, and a bowl of SALSA SAUCE on it. With a cup
of beer in hand, they are too busy FEASTING on chips that they CONSTANTLY
DIP into the bowl of salsa.
While they do so, Johan and Stephen SPOT Davin, Rebecca, TWO OF HER FEMALE
FRIENDS, Rob and Madsen enter the room. The newcomers walk over to the two
other UCLA students.
DAVIN
What’s up, ladies?
JOHAN
Sup dawg- Where’s Owen?
ROB
(while checking out the girls)
He said he’s gonna stop by with his girl. I
guess she has a day off from stripping or
something.
STEPHEN
Say what?? Since when was his girl a
stripper?
REBECCA
(briefly puts an arm around
Stephen’s shoulder)
Since now...this is Owen’s NEW girlfriend.
STEPHEN
Are you serious?
REBECCA
Yup.
(she kisses Stephen on the cheek
before walking away)
I guess he finally wanted PENETRATION in his
relationship.
Rebecca and the other UCLA students walk away. Stephen and Johan
frown at each other.
STEPHEN
Did YOU know Owen had a new girlfriend?
Johan shakes his head.
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EXT. UC IRVINE - FRAT HOUSE - PARKING LOT - EVENING
Katherine’s car PULLS UP in the parking lot at the frat house. A few seconds
later, her and Denise EMERGE from the vehicle. Denise has a flyer in her hand
that is the SAME as the one Jon Alba had at Spearmint Rhino.
KATHERINE
So are you ready to meet your significant
other?
DENISE
(smiles)
Whatever, Kathy...
Denise gives the flyer back to Katherine as they approach the frat house.
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INT. FRATERNITY HOUSE - PARTY - EVENING
Rick NOW JOINS Dandren, Mark, Johan and Stephen at the table.
RICK
So Dandren, give us the full story on why
your ass was brought back to SoCal.
DANDREN
Well actually, man...I was just minding
my own business. But one of my homeboys
was dying to start up shit with other
homeboys...and he dragged me into it.
MARK
Serious?
DANDREN
Yup. Some homeboy took out a knife to shank
my homeboy, and me and my other homeboy had
to join in to prevent him from doing that to
my homeboy. And then the pigs came on over
and arrested me and my homeboys and brought
our ass to jail. And then my parents had to
send cash over to NoCal to bail me out. But
don’t ask me anything about my homeboys, cuz
I don’t know what happened to them.
Rick, Johan, Stephen and Mark have a BLANK LOOK on their faces. Mark looks
at the other three guys.
MARK
What did he just say?
DANDREN
Dude, I told you the whole story on what
happened!
STEPHEN
Well, I kinda zoned out after the fourth
‘homeboy.’
JOHAN
Ditto.
DANDREN
Nevermind...
Dandren shakes his head as he continues to DIP chips into the salsa. Rick
observes him as he does so.
RICK
Hey, you’re not double-dipping...are you?
Stephen looks at the television set to see what is now taking place in “The Temple
of Doom.”
STEPHEN
Yo, this is my favorite scene.
It is the scene where INDIANA JONES-who is inside a cave-is on a bluff
overlooking a CULT CEREMONY that is taking place.
STEPHEN
I don’t know about you guys but I’m gonna
watch this part.
Stephen walks over to the couch that is in front of the television set.
Another GUY and his GIRLFRIEND are already sitting on the sofa. A few seconds
later, Dandren, Mark and Johan turn to join their friend in watching the movie.
Dandren turns to look at Rick, and gestures at the TV.
DANDREN
Hey choida, are you gonna watch?
RICK
(talking with his mouth full)
After I finish this.
Rick gestures to ALL THE FOOD that’s on the table in front of him. As his
four friends walk to the couch to watch “Indiana Jones,” Rick CONTINUES FEASTING
on all of the party treats. A few seconds later, he inadvertently turns to look
at the MAIN ENTRANCE to the room, and sees DENISE AND HER FRIEND WALK IN.
STUNNED, Soriano IMMEDIATELY STOPS eating.
He leaves the table to walk over to Denise. Dandren, Johan and Stephen frown
as Rick goes by WITHOUT SAYING A SINGLE WORD to them. Mark notices Rick
approaching Denise and nods.
MARK
That must be his chick.
STEPHEN
What the heck?
(looks at Johan)
We know that girl!
Denise and her friend are looking around the room as Rick walks toward them.
Denise and her friend SMILE AND COMMENT to each other about what’s taking place
inside the room. Denise finally sees Rick, and the fun-going expression on
her face changes to THAT of surprise.
Rick walks up to Denise and they both end up standing FACE-TO-FACE to each other.
RICK
Hey!
DENISE
Hi Ricky.
Katherine looks at Rick and then to Denise.
KATHERINE
You two know each other?
DENISE
(nods)
Yea, he’s in my lab class. Ricky, I would
like you to meet Katherine. Katherine-
Ricky.
RICK
Nice to meet you.
He and Katherine SHAKE HANDS. Rick then looks back at Denise.
RICK
So...How did you find out about this party?
DENISE
Um, Kathy had a flyer. She got it from
someone she knows in a frat at Long Beach.
Katherine takes out the flyer and shows it to Rick. He nods.
RICK
Ohhh, I see. Actually-
(a pause)
This is the party I told you about at
school today. The one I invited you to.
A pause as Katherine looks at her friend and then to Rick. She senses the
EMOTION in the situation.
KATHERINE
I’m gonna get something to eat. You two
continue talking.
Katherine walks away. As she does so, she spots Niema standing
across the room from her. SURPRISED, she looks back at Denise.
KATHERINE
Niema’s here! Gotta talk to him...
She quickly walks away. Rick and Denise are now ALONE.
RICK
Um, Denise I wanted to-
DENISE
Rick, I have to tell you something.
A pause as we get a glimpse of the TV. In this scene from INDIANA JONES, a
helpless prisoner entrapped inside a cage is A FEW MOMENTS AWAY from getting
his heart ripped out.
DENISE
It’s been something I had to tell you
ever since you handed me those gifts today.
Rick steps closer to her to SOFTLY hold one of her hands, a little smile apparent
on his face. The prisoner on INDIANA JONES is moments away from his FATE...
RICK
What is it?
A brief pause. Denise has the look of someone STRUGGLING to find the right
words to say to a person she does not want to hurt...but she knows she will.
DENISE
(hesitantly)
I have a boyfriend.
Rick has a BLANK EXPRESSION on his face for a couple of seconds. THE PRISONER
FINALLY GETS HIS HEART RIPPED OUT OF HIS CHEST IN THE TEMPLE OF DOOM.
Back to reality, Denise begins to feel bad as she sees a LOOK OF DEJECTION begin
to appear in her lab partner’s eyes. Rick lets go of Denise’s hand.
RICK
So all those smiles in class meant nothing,
huh? And that hug you gave me today...
DENISE
They meant something!
(Ricks nods in response)
I’m sorry...but I’ve been going through a lot
of problems in my relationship lately-and I
just needed someone to talk to.
I didn’t mean to give you the wrong signals,
Rick. I guess I shouldn’t have been too
outgoing when I met you.
RICK
But you were.
The two stare at each other for a couple of seconds.
DENISE
(soothingly)
You’ll meet the girl of your dreams,
eventually. I’m sure of it.
RICK
(a pause)
I thought I already did.
Rick smiles before finally turning around to WALK AWAY from Denise. She LOOKS SAD
as she watches him join Dandren and the other guys in watching the film. Dandren,
Stephen, Mark and Johan look at their dejected friend and then to Denise...a LOOK
OF PUZZLEMENT on their faces.
Denise stands at her spot for a couple more seconds and briefly
smiles at the four guys. She then turns and leaves. Stephen
looks at Rick-who is TRYING TO CONCENTRATE on the movie.
STEPHEN
Sorry Rick, we should’ve told you earlier.
RICK
Tell me what?
STEPHEN
About Denise having a boyfriend. Me
and Johan already knew about it.
RICK
You did?
Stephen and Johan NOD.
RICK
Well- Who IS her boyfriend?
A pause.
JOHAN
She’s with Owen.
An ANGRY LOOK appears on Rick’s face.
RICK
What??
INT. SPEARMINT RHINO - LOUNGE - FLASHBACK
Owen and his showgirl walk toward the area where Rick and his friends are standing.
Rick approaches him, and looks at her before saying something to the UCLA student.
RICK
Aren’t you getting a little TOO friendly?
OWEN
(frowns as he turns to look at his
showgirl and then to Rick)
So?...
(not wanting his showgirl to hear,
he leans over to speak to Rick
in a low voice)
Fuck my girlfriend.
BACK TO PRESENT DAY
RICK
He doesn’t even love her.
Rick then looks at Denise, and watches her WALK AWAY.
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INT. FRATERNITY HOUSE - STAIRWAY - EVENING
Owen and his girlfriend LAUGH as they head up the staircase.
GIRLFRIEND
I hope this is fun!
OWEN
Don’t worry, baby-you’ll have a good time...
The COUPLE enter the room where the party is being held.
INT. FRATERNITY HOUSE - PARTY - EVENING
Owen and his girlfriend are laughing together ONCE MORE as they enter the room.
Rick and Denise spot the COUPLE walk in, but it is Denise who Chau sees FIRST.
OWEN
Yo, what’s she doing here?
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