BACK
His girlfriend frowns as she sees Denise approach them. Owen, with him and
his girlfriend NOT MOVING a step, stands where he is while Denise stands
FACE-TO-FACE with him. Stephen, Johan and Rick WATCH the action take place
while still sitting on the couch. Rob and his friends, too busy conversing
with other PARTYGOERS, now turn to look at what is about to TRANSPIRE.
Denise BRIEFLY GAZES at the stripper before looking back at Chau.
DENISE
So this is why you haven’t returned my
calls, huh?
OWEN
Denise, I don’t want to talk about this
right now...
DENISE
Yea?- Well, I do! If you were gonna do
this to me then you could at least have the
decency to tell me you wanted to break up!
The other PARTYGOERS turn to see what the COMMOTION is.
OWEN
Look, I don’t have time for this. I-
DENISE
How could you do this to me??
A pause.
OWEN
You wanna know why I did this to you?
It’s because you’re TOO DAMN busy with
school and that internship you have...
That’s why I did this to you! You
hardly have any time for me!
Jon Alba and his two groupies are among the MANY who are watching the
confrontation.
JON
You know- If I wanted to watch
soap operas I’d have stayed at home.
GROUPIE #1
You watch soap operas?
JON
Yup, you?
GROUPIE #2
“Days of our Lives”...
JON
That’s my favorite too!
BOTH GROUPIES then KISS Jon on the cheek. Soriano continues watching the
ARGUMENT take place.
OWEN
Do you realize just how shitty
our relationship is?
DENISE
Well- I’m just TRYING to act like an
adult, Owen.
OWEN
Adult?? That’s bullshit!!!
(a pause)
What, just because you’re 22-fuckin’ years
old you have to have a 9 to 10-hour job at
some medical office? You have to take so
many damn units at school that you can’t
even drop by my pad often to say what’s up?
(another pause)
I didn’t get with you just to hear you talk
about how stressful your classes are. I got
with you so we can do things like mess
around...or FUCK!
Partygoers are TAKEN ABACK by Owen’s LAST COMMENT. Mark looks at Dandren.
MARK
He sure knows how to pick the right words
to say, does he?
DANDREN
He should become a politician while he’s at
it. Like Rob Dole.
MARK
BOB Dole.
DANDREN
Whatever.
Katherine, still standing FAR from Niema, looks at him and then back to Chau.
KATHERINE
What an asshole.
Denise is AT A LOST for words.
She briefly looks at Rick before she looks at Owen again.
In the short second she looked at him, Rick gets a hint that
things are about to change DRAMATICALLY.
DENISE
I’m sorry Owen. Even if you were as
busy as I am...I wouldn’t have done what
you’re doing to me right now.
OWEN
You’re right. I would’ve slapped your ass
around if you did. DUUUMB BITCH!
Denise has a STUNNED look on her face, and so does Chau’s girlfriend. Rick,
after hearing that, gets up from the couch and walks toward the three people.
RICK
Hey, why do you have to treat Denise like
that?
OWEN
Dude, fuck off...this is none of your
business.
RICK
Yea, well-I’ll make it my business!
OWEN
Oh, YOU WILL??
Owen SUDDENLY SHOVES Rick against a wall. Hitting the wall, Rick
quickly LEANS FORWARD to shove Chau back. Chau then THROWS A PUNCH, but
Rick DUCKS IN TIME. He is now CAUGHT OFF GUARD as Owen shoves him
back again. This time Rick FALLS TO THE GROUND.
Obviously, EVERYONE in the room now turns to watch the FIGHT.
OWEN
So you think you’re Mr. Righteous now, huh?
If you were so righteous, you wouldn’t have
went to that fuckin’ strip joint as well-
Bastard!
Denise frowns at Chau’s comment.
RICK
Yea, well at least I didn’t have a
GIRLFRIEND that time!
Rick, still kneeling on the ground, throws a punch at Owen-and
HITS him in the crotch. Owen grimaces as he JERKS backward.
Mihran and his friends TAKE DELIGHT at the situation.
NIEMA
Nice move, Rick...now kick his ass!
ALBERT
(still drunk)
Yea, toss his salad!
Albert’s friends FROWN at him. Owen, still grimacing from the hit to his lower
body area, SWINGS an arm at Rick, and this time HITS HIM in the face.
Soriano hits a wall again. Chau looks at Rob and the other UCLA guys, who
are watching the action take place from ACROSS the room.
OWEN
Why don’t you retards back me up??
ROB
Sorry, man- We also think it’s
messed up what you did to Denise.
Owen FROWNS in response. He then turns to look at Rick, but is still CAUGHT
OFF-GUARD as Rick SUCKER-PUNCHES him in the face. Owen QUICKLY RECOVERS from
the blow and gets Rick by the NECK and PINS HIM against the table. It is at
this time that Dandren, Mark, Stephen and Johan leave the couch. Chau PICKS UP
an EMPTY BEER BOTTLE from the table and prepares to swing it at Rick’s FACE.
Denise watches in HORROR...
OWEN
You shouldn’t have fucked with me, man!
Owen is ABOUT TO SWING the bottle when Dandren SNEAKS UP on him and
PUNCHES HIM in the face...KNOCKING Chau to the ground as a result.
Mark looks at the guy ON THE FLOOR and then back to Dandren.
MARK
Nice hit!
DANDREN
(nods as he rubs his hand
from the pain of impact)
Thanks.
Chau slowly gets up from the table, and is about to RUSH Dandren
when Mark, Stephen and Johan suddenly BLOCK HIS PATH.
MARK
Nice try, sir. But you’ve made an ass
out of yourself enough times already.
JOHAN
And you call yourself a Bruin-
STEPHEN
-and a church buddy.
(he frowns; he then looks at Johan)
OKAY, that was pretty LAME.
Owen looks at his girlfriend.
OWEN
Screw this. Let’s go, baby.
GIRLFRIEND
After the way you treated your other
girlfriend? I DON’T think so...
Chau angrily shakes his head as he walks TOWARD the room’s exit.
OWEN
Man, fuck all of you!!
Mihran turns to look at his friends after Owen EXITS the room.
NIEMA
That shit was TIGHT!!!
His friends laugh in response, while the rest of the PARTYGOERS in the
room begin CHEERING. Katherine walks up to Niema.
KATHERINE
Hey there, Niema.
NIEMA
YEEAAA-
(a surprised expression emerges
on his face)
Oh, uh...hey Kathy.
Katherine looks toward the SPOT where the fight took place.
KATHERINE
Would you have stood up for me?
NIEMA
Um-
(a smile suddenly emerges on his face)
Damn right, I would!!
KATHERINE
Awww...
A pause. Katherine then grabs Niema by the face and KISSES HIM.
Rick is helped off the table by Johan and Stephen.
RICK
Thanks guys.
(He then looks at Dandren and
gives him a high five)
Thanks for watching my back, man.
DANDREN
Yea, I’m starting to get pretty good
at this stuff.
Rick then looks on as Denise WALKS UP TO HIM. Another pause.
DENISE
So you went to a strip joint, huh?
Rick nods with a DOWN LOOK on his face.
RICK
I’m as much a jerk Owen is.
He is about to walk away when Denise GRABS ONE OF HIS ARMS.
DENISE
STILL...a jerk who looked out for me.
Thanks, Ricky.
RICK
So what’s gonna happen between you two?
DENISE
Owen didn’t understand me, even though
we were together for a year.
(a pause as she has a contemplative
look on her face)
I guess I gotta move on now- with someone
better...
(she stares directly into Rick’s
eyes)
Denise then grins. Despite smiling as well, Soriano has a
skeptical look on his face.
RICK
You’re not just settling for me, are you?
DENISE
I knew you were gonna ask that.
Denise smiles as she LEANS OVER to put HER FACE CLOSER to Rick’s.
Their lips are only a FEW CENTIMETERS from contact.
DENISE
Of course, not!
She then KISSES HIM on the cheek. Rick is AT A LOST for words.
RICK
Now, I know this is REALLY like a bad
romance film.
Denise beams more in response. A few seconds later,
TWO POLICE OFFICERS ENTER the room.
POLICE OFFICER #1
Someone reported a disturbance?
Dandren ROLLS HIS EYES as he looks at Johan, Stephen and Mark.
DANDREN
NOT AGAIN.
PEOPLE AROUND THE ROOM shake their heads. The TWO POLICE OFFICERS
frown at each other.
POLICE OFFICER #2
O-kay...
The two officers then leave the room. Chang looks at Dandren.
STEPHEN
You got lucky, man.
Katherine and Niema walk up to Denise.
KATHERINE
If you excuse me Niema and I will be
outside, um, TALKING to each other.
By the way, Denise- I would’ve won that bet.
(Denise smiles; Kathy then whispers to her)
Make a move, girl.
Denise watches her and Rick’s friend walk away.
NIEMA
Later, Rick!
Denise turns to look back at Rick. They both SMILE.
RICK
What bet?
CUT TO:
EXT. SORIANO HOUSE - DAY
All is QUIET outside the Soriano house.
INT. SORIANO HOUSE - RICK’S ROOM - DAY
Rick looks INSPIRED as he TYPES AWAY on his computer.
INSERT - THE SCRIPT
“...Smiling at her boyfriend, Deanne then LEANS
OVER to kiss him on the lips. Rich takes a HOLD
OF HER HAND, and they both continue making their
way down the college campus.
FADE-OUT
THE END”
BACK TO SCENE
Rick LEANS BACK in his chair after the LAST WORD is typed in
his script. Done pondering, he then reaches over to turn on
the PRINTER.
RICK
Okay... Time to print this thing.
CUT TO:
EXT. SORIANO HOUSE - DAY
SUBTITLE: “MAY 20...”
SUBTITLE #2: “A FEW MONTHS LATER.”
Phil’s Honda Accord PULLS UP next to the curb outside the house.
He and Lisa then emerge from the vehicle seconds later.
INT. SORIANO HOUSE - DAY
Phil and Lisa enter the house with more baggage than just the
two pieces of luggage Lisa LEFT WITH four months earlier.
LISA
I’m home!
The Mom and Dad enter the living room to give their daughter a
hug and a kiss.
DAD
Hi sweetheart, how was Germany?
LISA
It was great!
MOM
Did you have a nice trip?
LISA
(smiles and nods)
Yea! You two should go there sometime...
It’s pretty nice. Especially in the Rhine
Valley.
DAD
Don’t worry, we’ll go. Just not anytime
THIS year!
The Mom PLAYFULLY shoves the Dad as they leave the room. She
turns to look at Lisa and Phil as she does so.
MOM
Food’s on the table if you two are hungry.
LISA
Okay, mom.
Lisa then SEES Rick standing outside his room...holding the SCRIPT
in one of his hands. She and Phil walk upstairs.
LISA
So, did you finish it?
RICK
I’m holding it in my hand, aren’t I?
Lisa smiles as Rick hands her the screenplay.
PHIL
So what’s it about?
RICK
(shrugs)
It’s mostly based on the experiences
I had in the past few months.
LISA
(as she skims through the pages)
Oh?
RICK
Yup-
(making it sound like a joke)
But it’s primarily a love story.
Lisa hands Phil the script so he can take a look at it. Lisa
then opens her purse.
LISA
So how much do I owe you?
RICK
Actually...There were other things that
inspired me to write this script.
LISA
Really?
RICK
Yup, I found motivation elsewhere.
Lisa NODS in response. She is ABOUT to close her purse-
RICK
BUT-I didn’t say I no longer needed the
money...
Lisa rolls her eyes and smiles while opening her purse again. She
then hands $30 to Rick. He puts the money in his pocket.
RICK
(nods)
Thank you.
CUT TO:
EXT. LONG BEACH STATE - PETERSON HALL BUILDING - AFTERNOON
SUBTITLE: “LAST DAY OF THE SEMESTER.”
Rick and Denise exit from the Peterson Hall building.
DENISE
So you’re finally in your major, huh?
RICK
Yup, I passed that writing test with
flying colors.
DENISE
That’s good. I aced that exam, too.
RICK
Good job!
Rick reaches over to briefly put his arm AROUND HER SHOULDER.
RICK
I’m proud of you.
Denise smiles in response.
DENISE
So tell me more about that screenplay
you wrote.
RICK
Well, it’s an unusual college flick- About
some dude who decides to write a script
based on a bunch of events he and his
friends go through.
DENISE
Sounds good...
RICK
And over the course of those events,
he meets a girl at school that he
later falls in love with.
DENISE
Gee, I wonder where you got THAT idea
from...
Rick then turns to look at Denise. Denise SMILES in response, and
LEANS OVER to KISS HIM ON THE LIPS. A pause afterwards, as she now
has an earnest look on her face.
DENISE
Now that school’s over, we have the entire
summer to make this relationship work.
(her companion remains silent)
Aren’t you looking forward to it?
Rick takes a HOLD OF ONE OF HER HANDS.
RICK
What do you think?
Denise smiles again as they CONTINUE WALKING.
DENISE
So what’s your script called?
RICK
You wanna know? Okay, get ready for this-
A pause.
RICK
I call it... Hardcores.
DENISE
(having both a smile and a frown)
Hardcores??
RICK
Yea, what’s wrong with that?
DENISE
(smiles even more)
I dunno... Couldn’t you pick a
better name?
RICK
What are you talking about?!
It’s a cool name! It describes a
story that’s a mixture of romance,
drama, and comedy. It’s awesome!
DENISE
‘Hardcores’ describes all that?
RICK
Yea, you just gotta put more
thought into it! Anyway, this is
how the story goes. There’s this
guy name Rich, and he’s...
Rick CONTINUES EXPLAINING the story to Denise, who LAUGHS CHEERFULLY to
what he is telling her.
Still hand-in-hand, they CONTINUE MAKING THEIR WAY down the college campus.
FADE-OUT
THE END
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